I notice..

I notice how your smile lights up your face.
I notice a softness of the honest kind..
I notice how different from normal my observation is ....

I notice how hardships have made you stronger
I notice how you possess a silent inner confidence
I notice how you are proud of what you have achieved

I notice how generous you can be even when that generosity isn't reciprocated.
I notice how different our lives have been and how different we are because of this.
I notice how our differences could be positive.

I notice how things are changing..
I notice how equations with people are now different
I notice how you don't voice this increasing dis-comfort...

I notice how when things have been asked.. no solid answers have been received
I notice how those answers have been lost in interpretation-deliberately
And I notice how this seems acceptable.

I marvel at how ..while we don't acknowledge it... we're thinking it...

Comments

A.Wahab said…
Ommara you are too good at this. Your beautiful way of writing makes the reader think deeper and deeper.

By reading this i can say:
"My eyes see what you write, my brain thinks what you feel and my heart never stops questioning unless it is satisfied".
Ommara said…
Thanks Wahab. Am glad it made you think..To never stop questioning -I like that-a deep rooted want of knowledge can only lead to a conscious growth of mind and spirit.
May it always continue
Hayaah said…
poignant the last line...

indeed!

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